OOC Act I

Gatac 2014-08-08 12:07:23
Just an OOC note, while I'm aware that the rendezvous with Donna is not that night, it's kinda slipped Ed's mind. He might get up to a mistake working with Drew because he thinks he needs to rush to meet Donna afterwards.

Or might interrupt something when he does show up at the hotel unannounced.
Community Lotion 2014-08-08 12:09:55
Gatac wrote:

Just an OOC note, while I'm aware that the rendezvous with Donna is not that night, it's kinda slipped Ed's mind. He might get up to a mistake working with Drew because he thinks he needs to rush to meet Donna afterwards.

Or might interrupt something when he does show up at the hotel unannounced.


I have no idea what is going to happen at that hotel room - but I look forward to finding out!
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-08 12:23:54
I figure watching a movie with Tammy Lee is an immediate white die situation for Ed, BUT if he misses his thing with Drew, that's not good. Or maybe that covers Drew's black die we gave him. I could go either way for how this is good or bad for Ed. Being caught between 2 women who just want to use him isn't good good, but for Ed, it's better than usual.

Meh... I say black die.
Dieter 2014-08-08 12:30:05
Agreed. He either does something nefarious with Drew or continues the downward spiral in the white-trash love triangle.

Either way, IMO....Ed deserves a black die.
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-08 14:01:16
All right, so I'm thinking if Tammy locks up for Ed, she finds the drug stash in the pornos (our Object). Then she takes it, and hides it somewhere dumb, like her workplace. We don't have all that many scenes, and this would definitely start mixing up the pot IMO.
MikeS 2014-08-08 15:57:09
Ah, yes, the object. So you want there to be drugs in the Untoward Object?

That should be Drew's current stash, and while he'd be absolutely pissed if it went missing, it should be a lot smaller than what Drew hopes to score with Donna.
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-08 16:01:42
I think it'd be cool if there was drugs in the Untoward Object, yes. And I absolutely agree Drew wouldn't be taking the risk unless he could really score big with Donna. Moving it to Chicken Hut also levers that part of our Setup back into play a little more.
Community Lotion 2014-08-08 16:04:32
Is it too far out of the established wheelhouse to say its something other than drugs? Might be an opportunity to open the thing up a bit, so to speak. I can't really think of anything good to replace it. (Not that I have a problem with drugs, I just don't want to waste an opportunity to explore a bit further.)

Maybe:
evidence that Rocco and/or Donna is a RICO informant?
evidence that Ed is part of some kind of drug-running ring of underworld types using the boxing ring as cover?
a bottle of poison?
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-08 16:07:53
Hmm. If Ed's Keyzer Soze, I wouldn't want to blow that this early. But Donna or Rocco narcing for RICO is pretty good, although that doesn't seem to be Tammy's wheelhouse so much. I could work with that if we thought that was better, though. And enough drugs IS poison. tee hee.

I'm angling for "drugs in close proximity to food prepation area" hilarity, myself. Tammy Lee's finally gonna make one hell of a coffee...
Dieter 2014-08-08 21:32:23
Admiral Duck Sauce wrote:

Hmm. If Ed's Keyzer Soze, I wouldn't want to blow that this early. But Donna or Rocco narcing for RICO is pretty good, although that doesn't seem to be Tammy's wheelhouse so much. I could work with that if we thought that was better, though. And enough drugs IS poison. tee hee.

I'm angling for "drugs in close proximity to food prepation area" hilarity, myself. Tammy Lee's finally gonna make one hell of a coffee...

"Something...something....I'm too high to taste this chicken!"
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-11 09:28:54
It doesn't really matter (hilarious drugs) what's in the porn stash (non-specific drugs) unless Ed says it's okay for Tammy Lee to lock up after him. But there was a black die for Drew, a black die for Ed, and IMO this would cover both while still allowing Ed to meet Drew on time. Let us know, Robert!
Admiral Duck Sauce 2014-08-11 11:59:27
Working on it now! I'm thinking this is a scene that needs to get Rocco involved, and we could potentially have a scenario at Rocco's car lot as soon as Dave's first scene. But not before that, I think, because he's still not part of the storyline yet. I'm working on that now.